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Post by Peace on Aug 6, 2007 7:48:51 GMT -5
~this one is one of the very few my sister has written that isn't dark or disturbing. lol. thought i'd share. she did well, considering she doesn't really write a whole lot of poetry.~
~the fae~
tiny little fae I see it is your day the sunshine so bright you would simply take flight
hiding in the thin shadows I'd watch you flutter and disappear into the light without an utter
silent little fae flying away
how rare it is that I can say I enjoy this sort of day but thinking of you shines light anew
this day is merry in light of the faerie
~ogothangel~
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Post by ♥Starlene on Aug 6, 2007 8:29:08 GMT -5
i like it, very pretty
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Post by Nate on Aug 6, 2007 9:42:04 GMT -5
Very nice, looks like talent runs in the family.
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Post by Peace on Aug 6, 2007 9:53:32 GMT -5
wweeelllll, kinda. lol.
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Post by Nate on Aug 6, 2007 9:56:27 GMT -5
LOL, okay, you're the most talented!
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Post by Peace on Aug 6, 2007 11:56:02 GMT -5
he he he, no i didn't mean it like that. lol. she just has other talents. lol. poetry is a rarety for her, but when she does, it's pretty good. lol. (thanks for the kissing up, though)
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Post by Sloan on Aug 6, 2007 17:58:04 GMT -5
simple, I like it.
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